“IM thinks if Alex proceeds to write his thesis, he will need a substantial amount of support. This submission is not focused and grammatically is not strong.… KJ emphasised that this would not be an early submission.”
“This judgment can be tested in the viva voce examination from which the capacity of the candidate both to appreciate the criticisms of the thesis and to meet the challenges they represent should become apparent.”
“…on the basis of our reading of the thesis alone, we both recommended option three. Throughout the lengthy viva in which the candidate was given the opportunity to respond effectively to criticisms of the thesis, it became clearly apparent that he did not have the ability to respond as we had hoped. This was true of virtually all aspects of the work that had been presented, both in terms of theoretical and conceptual understanding of what was required and of the issues relating to the empirical dimension and the analysis of the information gathered. He had no understanding of what was meant by ethnographic methodology or of case study. We feel that the candidate’s best interests resid in the acceptance of a Masters degree for the thesis presented as it stands, and therefore we recommend option four to Keele University.”